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高一英语下册期末试卷(有答案)和高考满分作文:我与真善美诗意栖居(93)2016—2017学年度第二学期期末教学质量检测试题高一年级(下) 英语本试卷共10页,第Ⅰ卷(选择题)和第Ⅱ卷(非选择题)两部分;满分150分,考试时间120分钟。考试结束时,只收回答题卡。第Ⅰ卷(选择题 共100分)注意事项:1.答题前,考生务必填写答题卡上的学校、班级、姓名、考号。2.每小题选出答案后,将答案填写在答题卡上的相应位置。不能在试题卷上答题。 第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)第一节(共5小题:每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话,每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在答题卡的相应位置。听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一题。每段对话仅读一遍。1.Whatisthewomanprobablydoing?A.Sheislisteningtotheradio. B.Sheisreadingbooks. C.SheiswatchingTV.2.Whenwillthetwospeakersprobablydiscusstheplan?A.Overdinner. B.Afterdinner. C.Beforedinner.3.Whatdoesthemanplantowatchfirst?A.Asoccergame. B.Anearthquakereport. C.Amovie.4.Wheredoesthewomanprobablycomefrom? A.America. B.China. C.Canada.5.What’stheprobablerelationshipbetweenthetwospeakers?A.Husbandandwife. B.Doctorandpatient. C.Teacherandstudent.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分) 听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在答题卡的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前,你将有时间阅读各个小题,每小题5秒钟;听完后,
各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。请听第6段材料,回答第6、7题。6.Whatdidthemandoonhisweekend?A.Heplayedbasketball. B.Hewenttothecinema. C.Hewentshopping.7.Whatdoesthewomanthinkoftheman’sroommate?A.He’snotbright. B.He’sweak. C.He’sinteresting.请听第7段材料,回答第8、9题。8.Wherearethetwospeakersgoing?A.Toachurch. B.Toanexhibition. C.Toashop.9.Whatcanwelearnfromtheconversation?A.Themandoesn’tknowtheway.B.Thewomanisnewinthetown.C.Thetwospeakersaretourists.请听第8段材料,回答第10至12题。10.Whatkindofgamewasit?A.Itwasafootballgame. B.Itwasabasketballgame. C.Itwasabaseballgame.11.Whoranthefastest?A.Theman. B.
Gary. C.Carl.12.Whatdoweknowabouttheman?A.He’snotagoodplayer.B.Hisanklewashurtinthegame.C.Hewatchedthewholegame.请听第9段材料,回答第13至16题。13.HowmanymembersdoestheInternationalFriendsClubhavenow?A.About50. B.About30. C.About15.14.WhatactivitydoestheclubhaveonThursdayevenings?A.Asportsevent. B.Alanguageclass. C.Aget-togethermeal.15.Whatday’slanguageeveningshouldthewomangoto?A.Friday. B.Wednesday. C.Tuesday.16.Whatdoweknowaboutthewoman? A.Shewantstofindajobthere.B.Shehasmanyfriendsthere.C.Sheisnewthere.请听第10段材料,回答第17至20题。17.Whydidthewomangetfatter?
A.Becausetherewassomethingwrongwithher.B.Becauseshelikedfoodsrichinfatandsugar.C.Becausesheneverdidanysports.18.Whatdoweknowaboutthewoman’sworkmates?A.Theytriedtomakehertrustherself.B.Theyhelpedhertoloseweight.C.Theylaughedather.19.Howmanypieceswasthewoman’sbirthdaycakecutinto?A.Two. B.Four. C.Six.20.Whatcanwelearnfromthetext?A.Thewomanwaspoor.B.Itwashardforthewomantoloseweight.C.Thewomanwasnottroubledatallbyherweight.第二部分 阅读理解(共两节,满分40分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。AFundayTocelebratetheYearoftheDogOrganizedbyLamTinYouthCentreandKwunTongHighschoolDate:2February2018
Time:10am–5pmPlace:KwnTongPlaygroundFee:$20(buythreegetonefree)Programmes:drama,liondance,magicshowandballetperformanceHighlights:1)entertheluckydrawtowinadigitalcamera 2)learntomakefestivalfood JoinusontheFunday!FreeSoftDrinks Allarewelcome!Note: ★TicketareavailableattheGeneralOfficeofLamTinYouthCentre. ★Forthosewhowouldliketobeavolunteer,pleasecontactMissOliviaWongoneweekbeforetheactivity.
21.Whatisgoingtotakeplaceon2February,2018?A.AbigeventtowelcomeaChinesenewyear.B.Asocialgatheringtoraisemoneyforwildlife.C.Apartyforclosefriendstomeetandhavefun.D.AmeetingofKwunTongHighSchoolstudents.22.Howmuchdoyouhavetopayintotaliffourofyougotogether?A.$20 B.$40 C.$60 D.$8023.Whichofthefollowingstatementsistrue?A.TicketsaresoldinKwunTongHighSchool.B.It’sunnecessarytotakesoftdrinkswithyou.C.Freedigitalcamerasareprovidedforeverybody.D.Studentscanhavefestivalfoodasmuchastheycan.B Readthefollowingreviewsformoviesthatareshowingatthemoment.Andthenanswerquestions.
Happiness(Romance)★★★★ Happinesstellsthestoryoftwopeople(LisaTurbotandDannyRoy)whoworkfordifferentadvertisingcompanies.Theytalkonthephoneallthetimeanddontlikeeachother.Butthentheycorrespondbyemailandfallinlove.Thismoviewillbeverypopularwithteenagersandpeoplewholikeromances.Italsohasbeautifulmusic.IScream(Thriller)★★ InIScream,Paul(ColinJacks)isayoungmanwhojoinsathrillerclub.Eachofthememberstriestofrightentheothers.Paulistoldtostayinanoldhouseforthenight.Everyonewhohastriedtostayinthehousebeforehasdied.Thismovieisveryfrighteningbutalsoquitesilly.ItdoesntmakesenseforPaultostayinthehousewhenthingsstarttowrong.Onlyforpeoplewholikethrillers.Paulsheroes(Comedy)★★★ ThisisaveryfunnywarmoviesetinWorldWarTwo.Sixsoldiers(includingSammyTurblow)havetogettoItalytotakesecretmessagestotheAmericanarmythere.Duringthemovie,theydressupaswomenandfightwithItalianworkers.Youcanguesstheendingbutitsgreatfungettingthere.
__________(Drama)★★★★★ ThisisaverygooddramawithJackRoss,whoplaysahard¬workingtruckdriver.Hiswifebecomesillandhehastofindadoctorwhocanhelpher.Inhistravels,hemeetsDr.Lioyd(PhilDriver)whohasfoundthecurefortheillness,butJackRosshasonlytwelvehourstogetthemedicinebacktohiswifeontheothersideofAmerica.Thisisanexcellentmoviewhichisveryexciting.24.Whatmoviedoesthereviewerlikebest A.No1. B.No2. C.No3. D.No4.25.Athrillerismostprobably__________________.A.AfilmwhichtellsaninterestingstoryB.AfilmfullofexcitementC.AhumorousfilmD.Afilmwhichisaboutaloveaffair26.Theunderlinedword“correspond”canbereplacedby_______________.A.communicate B.match C.write D.exchange 27.Whichofthefollowingisthebesttitleforthefourth
film? A.AHard¬workingTruckDriver B.MedicineC.AStrangeIllness D.TwelveHoursC E-mailsystemsatthousandsofcompaniesandgovernmentofficesaroundtheworldwereattackedbyavirus(病毒)called“Melissa”thatdisguises(伪装)itselfasan“importantmessage”fromafriend.Inspiteofaweekendofwarnings,morethan50000computersatabout100placesaroundtheworldhavebeenattackedbythevirus,computersecurityexpertssaidonMonday. ThevirusbegantoshowuplastFridayandspreadrapidlyonMondaybymakingcomputersfireoffdozensofinfected(被传染的)e-mails.Althoughtheviruscausesnoseriousdamagetoacomputer,itseffectwasfarreaching. Tomakemattersworse,asimilarviruscalled“Papa”wasdiscoveredonMonday.Papaisprogrammedtosendoutevenmoreinfectede-mailsthanMelissa.
TheMelissaviruscomesintheformofane-mail,usuallycontainingthesubjectline“ImportantMessage”.Itappearstobefromafriend.Thebodyofthee-mailmessagesays,“Hereisthatdocumentyouaskedfor...,don’tshowittoanyoneelse.”Attached(附)tothemessageisadocumentfile. Oncetheuseropensthatfile,thevirusdigsintotheuser’saddressbookandsendsinfecteddocumentstothefirst50addresses.E-mailsfromthePapavirusincludeanattachedspreadsheet(电子数据文件)file.Whentheuseropensthatfile,thevirussends60infectede-mails. Thereasonwhythisisspreadingsofastisthatyouaregettingitfrompeopleyouknow.Youshouldneveropendocumentsorattachmentsfrompeopleyoudon’tknow.Peoplewhogetanunexpectede-mailwiththe“importantmessage”subjectlineshoulddeleteitimmediatelyandnotopenthemessage.28.ThousandsofcomputerswereattackedbytheMelissavirus_______________.A.coveredwithanimportantmessageB.undercoverofamessageneedingimmediateattentionC.undertheclothesofanimportante-mail
D.withabeautifulcoat29.TheMelissavirusmadeacomputer_____________________.A.receivetensofbade-mailsB.fireatmanysicke-mailmessagesC.sendoutscoresofinfectedmessagesD.burnwithafirebecauseofmanyinfectede-mails30.AftertheattackbytheMelissavirusacomputer________________.A.wasslightlydamagedB.becameentirelyoutoforderC.couldnotsendoutanye-mailanylongerD.wouldhavetobethrownaway31.IfyouopenedaninfectedfilebyMelissavirus,theviruswould______________.A.damagetheuser’saddressbookatonceB.soonspreadthroughtheuser’slistofaddressC.letthefirst50addressesgooutofthecomputerD.changetheuser’saddressbookinthecomputerD Norahhadacottageonacliffaboveabigbay.Inwinteritcouldbeverynastybecauseofstrongwindsandseaspray.Infact,whenagalewasblowing,Norahandherhusband
got usedtosleepinginasmallroomdownstairs,becausetheirbedroomupstairs,whichfacedthegales,hadaverybigwindow,andtheywereafraidthatanextraviolentgustmightbreakitandblowpiecesofbrokenglassoverthem. Also,thesaltsprayfromtheseaputanendtomanyofthecolourfulplantsNorahplantedinhergarden.Shetriedputtingupafencetoprotectthem,butthewindjusthitit,wentupoverthetopandthendowntheotherside,sointheendshefilledthegardenwithtreesandbushesthatlikedsalt. ButmostofthesummerNorahenjoyedhercottageandgardenverymuch.Atweekendsshecouldsitoutofdoorsinthesun,lookingatthebeautifulview,withinterestingshipsandboatspassingby,andshecouldveryeasilycycledowntotheseaforaswim. Now,Norahandherhusbandhadplentyoffriendsandrelations.Inthesummerlotsofthemusedtocometoenjoythebeautifulplace,andintheenditreallybecamequiteannoyingforNorahandherhusband.Whentheywereathome,theyfoundfriendsandrelationsarriving,expectingtobegivenunlimiteddrinksandmeals,andtositinthesunforhours,talkingasifNorahandherhusband
hadnothingelsetodobutentertainandlistentothem. Thiswentonforseveralyears.Norahdidnotwishtoappearrudebyrefusingtoletherfriendsandrelationsin,butontheotherhand,shewasgettingtiredeverysummer.ThenonedayNorahwascomplainingaboutthistoherhairdresserwhileshewasdoingherhair.“You’redisturbedbytoomanyuninvitedguests,areyou?”saidthehairdresser.“Whydon’tyoutrymywayofescaping?” “What’sthat?”askedNorah. “Well,”thehairdresseranswered,“whenthebellrings,Iputonmycoatandtakemyshoppingbag.Ifit’ssomeoneIdon’twanttosee,Isayinnocently,’I’msorry,butI’vegottogoout.’But...”32.Theunderlinedword“cycle”canbereplacedby_______________.A.ridebybike B.drive C.walk D.gobyship33.Wecaninferthat________________.A.alotoffriendscametovisittheminwinterB.fewfriendscametovisittheminwinter
C.friendscametovisitthemonlyfordrinksandmealsD.Norahwasagoodcook34.Whichofthefollowingisthebesttitle?A.AGoodPlaceofEnjoyingtheSeaB.AWarm-heartedCoupleC.ACleverWayofEscapingD.AVisittoNorah 35.Whatisthehairdresserlikelytocontinuetosayintheend? A.IfIamtired,Isay,“Sorry,canyoucomenexttime?”B.Ifit’ssomeoneIliketosee,Isay,“Howlucky!I’vejustcomein!”C.Ifit’ssomeoneIliketosee,Isay,“Howhappytoseeyou!Iwasgoingshopping,butnowI’vechangedmymind.”D.Ifitisfinethatday,Isay,“I’mtiredofthis,butI’llshowyouaroundtheplace,anyhow.”第二节 (共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 Whenyoustepintoanewenvironment,youmusthave
astrongwishtofitin.Fittinginmeansmakingmorefriends,havingmoreinfluenceonothersandgettingmorechancestoliveahappierlife. 36 Beconfident.Confidenceattractsmostpeople.Everyoneisspecialandthereisonlyonepersonlikeyouinthisworld.Spendsometimethinkingaboutyourstrongpoints. 37 Youwonthavemuchdifficultyfittingin. Bekindtoeveryone.Kindnessisthebridgetoyourownhappiness.Whenpeoplenoticeyourkindness,theywillreturnitoneday.Alwaysgivemorethanyoureceive,andthinkmoreofothersthanofyourself. 38 39 Variousactivitieslikeplayingfootballcanhelpyoutobeknowntoothers.Youmayaddmorefriendstoyourcircle.Atthesametime,youllbeamazedtoseehowmuchtheylikeyou.Insteadofwastingtimebeingalone,goouttodanceandsingtogetherwithotherstodevelopfriendship. Dosmiletoeveryoneeveryday.Itmakesbothyouandothersfeelhappy. 40 Humorcatchesothersattentionaswell.Peoplewilllikeyouformakingthemlivehappily.
Ifyoufollowwhatismentionedabove,youwillbeacceptedbypeoplearoundyou.Asaresult,youwillfitinverywellandenjoyyournewlife.A.Beactiveingroupactivities.B.Apleasantsmilecoststheleastanddoesthemost.C.Hereissomeadvicethatcanhelpyou.D.Ifso,youwillbeabletobuildupconfidencestepbystep.E.Apersonwhocaresforothersispopulareverywhere.F.However,everybodyneedsfriends.G.Evenso,itoftenleavesonetowonderifwefitinwell.第三部分英语知识运用(共两节,满分45分)第一节完形填空(共20小题:每小题1.5分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 ArrivinginSydneyonhisownfromIndia,myhusband,Rashid, 41 inahotelforashortperiodoftimewhile 42 ahouseformeandourchildren. Duringthefirstweekofhisstay,hewentoutonedaytodosomeshopping.Hecamebackinthelateafternoonto 43 thathissuitcasewas 44 .Hewasextremely 45 asthesuitcasehadallhis
important 46 ,includinghispassport. Hereportedthe 47 tothepoliceandthensatthere,lostand 48 inastrangecity,thinkingoftheterribletroublesofgettingallthepaperwork 49 againfromadistantcountrywhiletryingto 50 inanewone. Lateintheevening,the 51 rang.Itwasastranger.Hewastryingto 52 myhusband’snameandwasaskinghimalotofquestions.Thenhesaidtheyhadfoundapileofpapersintheirtrashcanthathadbeenleftoutonthefootpath. Myhusband 53 totheirhometofindakindfamilyholdingallhispapers.Theiryoungdaughterhadgonetothetrashcanandfoundapileof 54 papers.Then,herparentshadcarefullysortedthemout, 55 theyhadfoundmainlyforeignaddressesonmostofthedocuments. 56 theyhadseenahalf-written 57 inthepileinwhichmyhusbandhadgivenhisnewtelephonenumbertoafriend. Thatfamilynotonly 58 theimportantdocumentstousthatdaybutalsorestoredourfaithand 59 inpeople.Now,we 60 remember
theirkindnessandoftensendawarmwishtheirway.41.A.stayed B.waited C.worked D.slept42.A.pickingup B.takingup C.lookingfor D.payingfor43.A.discover B.know C.catch D.see44.A.disappeared B.losing C.missed D.gone45.A.angry B.worried C.lucky D.frightened46.A.works B.instructions C.papers D.clothes47.A.crime B.case C.activity D.problem48.A.alone B.lonely C.stressful D.equal49.A.sent B.done C.organised D.made 50.A.settledown B.putdown C.cutdown D.calmdown51.A.doorbell B.alarm C.phone D.sound52.A.ask B.tell C.pronounce D.judge53.A.rushed B.walked C.flew D.drove54.A.old B.previous C.important D.unfamiliar
55.A.because B.although C.asif D.when56.AInall B.Atlast C.Atfirst D.Inconclusion 57.A.letter B.book C.e-mail D.report58.A.brought B.gave C.restored D.carried59.A.friendship B.competition C.sympathy D.trust60.A.also B.ever C.never D.still 第Ⅱ卷 (非选择题 共50分)注意:将答案写在答题卡上。写在本试卷上无效。第三部分 英语知识运用(共两节,满分45分)第二节(共10小题:每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Thereoncewereagoatandadonkey61._______(live)onafarm.Thedonkeyworkedthehardestsothefarmer62._______(feed)itthemostfood.Sometimesthedonkeywasgivenmorefood63._______itcouldeat.Thismadethe
goatsojealous64._______itbeganplottingagainst(谋划对付)thedonkey."Hey,donkey,"thegoatsaidoneday."Ithinkyoudotoomuchworkonthisfarm.Youcarrysuchheavythingsfrommorningtonight.Whydontyoupretend65._______(get)sicksoyoucantakeaday66._______?Thedonkeythoughtthegoathadagreatidea.Sothenextmorning,thedonkeylayinthestable(畜栏)onitssidewithitseyes67._______(close).68._______(immediate),thefarmercalledthedoctor.Afterlookingatthedonkey,thedoctorsaiditneededaspecial69._______(medical)madefromtheheartofagoat.Sothefarmerkilled70._______goatandgavethedonkeymedicinemadefromitsheart. 第四部分 写作(共两节,满分35分) 第一节 短文改错(共10小题:每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Duringthesummerof2001,IstartedreadingbooksbyEnglish,mostlystories.Iwouldlearnalotofnewwordsfromthesebooks,butIhadterriblyproblemsmemorizingthem.Ihadtolookuptothesamewordmanytimes,forwhichwasquitetroublesome.IrealizedIdoneedawaytorememberallthesenewwords.Itwasagreatsuccessformyself.IstartedwritingdownwordsfrombooksthatIread.Iwouldcomebackfromschoolandthensitforanhourandtwo.Iwrotedownnewwordsandaddedittomycollection.Bytheendoflastyear,mycollectionhasgrownto3000words. 第二节书面表达(满分25分)假设你是中学生李华,6月5日是“世界环境日”,你校开展了相关志愿者活动,请给你的美国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件,介绍此次活动,内容请包括:1.时间、地点;2.开展的具体活动;3.你的看法。注意: 1.词数100左右;2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.参考词汇:世界环境日WorldEnvironmentDay;志愿者的voluntary DearMike, Howiseverythinggoing? Yours, LiHua 2016—2017学年度第二学期期末教学质量检测试题高一年级 英语参考答案及评分标准听力:1—5ACACB 6—10BACBA 11—15CBACA 16—20CBCAB阅读:21—35 ACB 24-27 DBAD 28-31 BCAB 32-35 ABCB 36—40 CDEAB完型:41—45ACADB 46—50CBBCA 51—55CCADB 56—60 BACDD
语法填空:61.living 62.fed 63.than 64.that 65.toget 66.off 67.closed 68.Immediately 69. medicine 70.his/the改错: Duringthesummerof2001,IstartedreadingbooksbyEnglish,mostlystories.Iwouldlearnalotofnewwords infromthesebooks,butIhadterriblyproblemsmemorizingthem.Ihadtolookuptothesamewordmanytimes,for terriblewhichwasquitetroublesome.IrealizedIdoneedawaytorememberallthesenewwords.Itwasagreatsuccess didformyself.Istartedwritingdownwordsfrom∧booksthatIread.Iwouldcomebackfromschoolandthensit me the foranhourandtwo.Iwrotedownnewwordsandaddedittomycollection.Bytheendoflastyear,my
or themcollectionhasgrownto3000words. had 作文范文: DearMike, Howiseverythinggoing?.June5thisWorldEnvironmentDay,soourschoolorganizedthevoluntaryactivity.Letmetellyouaboutit. OnthemorningofJune5th,wegatheredinthePeople’sSquare.Then,wecarriedoutmanyactivities.First,weperformedaplayaboutourenvironment,whichattractedalotofaudiences.Afterthat,wegaveoutleafletstopassers-bytoarousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Intheend,wepickedupthelitterandcleanedthechairsintheSquare.Inmyopinion,theactivityisreallymeaningful.Ontheonehand,allofushavelearnedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Ontheotherhand,wehavenotonlydoneourpart,butalsoencouragedothercitizenstoprotectit.Doyouhavesuchvoluntaryactivities?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yours, LiHua 书面表达评分细则:一、评分原则1.本题总分为20分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数少于60,从总分中减去2分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写与标点符号是准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1、活动 2、时间、地点
3、活动内容 4、看法各档次语言要点配分参考标准档次 要点数 要点分 语言要点表达情况划档依据 第五档 4 16-20 语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚第四档 3 10-15 语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚第三档 2 6~10 语言有一些错误,尚能表达第二档 1 1~5 语言错误很多,影响表达第一档 0 0~2 只能写出与要求内容有关的一些单词三、扣分参考依据1、其表达未能达成正确句意的,不给分,如:写出了主语或谓语等关键词,但未能达成符合要点要求、意义正确的句子.2、句子结构完整、但关键点出现错误或漏掉部分关键词,扣半个要点分,如:主谓一致错误,或关键词拼写错误(如主语,关键性名词等),或谓语动词时态/语态错误等;3、凡使用铅笔答题、或答题中使用了涂改液或不干胶条,一律不给分;4、凡多次出现非关键性单词拼写错误或其它同类错误,原则上每4处扣1分;
5、文章内容要点全面,但写出了一些多余内容(连接或过渡词句不在此列),原则上不扣分;6、凡书写超出规定的答题区域,全卷不给分;高考满分作文:我与真善美诗意栖居 当厚厚的一摞《格林童话》印成铅字,成为儿童们手中的珍宝,当慈爱的父母为婴儿朗诵那诗篇般的传说,当童话中善良的公主为孩子五彩斑斓的梦增色……这些传说的真谛,格林兄弟们苦苦寻觅的与人类发展史的联系,于无言处彰显。那便是亘古以来不变的人之血脉——真、善、美。
这是多少简单的三个字,却总是被数数然的我们轻易忽视。格林兄弟穷究传说中的字句,希望找到隐藏其中的真理、律条,却忽略了那连邻家孩提都能总结的至真善至美。 我们总是如此,实用性的价值标准成了现代人的鼻环,殊不知科学、技术、修辞终须美感、善念与真诚为线,前来缝合。没有真善美为信仰的实用主义,只是清寂的旧代朝服,扣子滴滴答答地掉,散落满地。是的,我们必须有充满劳绩的实用主义来领航,但人之为人,不能缺少信仰指南。 荷尔德林曾说,充满劳绩,人还是要诗意地栖居在这片大地之上。若我们只是一味追求实用的劳绩,纵使有丰硕的穗粒、有甜美的饭食,却依旧只是匍匐于地的生灵。若当真如此,我亦要赞美人类谦卑的神态与丰厚的劳绩,却哀伤于灵魂的羁旅无依。你可曾听说,灵魂,是大地上的异乡者?是美,让人的双膝直立行走,傲然挑战烈日!是真诚,让人之间萌生称之为爱的强韧纽带,让人性溢满芬芳!是善,让这群大地上的异乡者将根基所向土地深处,却始终向上生长,不生旁枝!海德格尔说,精神乃是涌向天空、追逐上帝的狂飚。是真善美创造了人的无限可能!人对内在生命无数次的重生与再造,无不是以美为明亮的焰火,善为摆渡的舟身,真为手中的柱杖。
当我们翻读《格林童话》,或是《同海经》、《伊索寓言》,我们看到的人类历史前行之指路灯,皆是人性的光芒。矢志不渝的爱情,星汉为之震慑的母子纽带,抑或是一诺千金的友谊,都建立在无与伦比的人性之上,真善美之上,没有公式的繁琐,亦无关定律的教务,她们真实存在,为人类铺路助行。 实用主义的发展迷惑了我们的视线,越来越多的人崇尚于机件般的冷酷言行,我们忽略了美,遗失了真,摒弃了善,似乎惟有孩童依然未忘记那颗徇霞般的初心。 不,我要依然将根基深扎地下,引体向上接近太阳。我要同树的主干一般强壮,善是我枝干中的琼浆,我将现实的责难裁成片片绿叶贴于项间额前,真是丰沛的雨水,美是头顶的湛蓝晴空。 点评:这是一篇立意新颖,思想深刻的议论性散文,它的脱颖而出彰显出一个写作道理:文以意为先。思想成就人的尊严和价值,深刻决定议论的品味和意蕴。文章开头从材料的引述中得出中心论点,并涉及了一个时代性的困惑:实用性的价值往往取代审美主义的价值成为主流,实在令人忧思。文章引述荷尔德林、海德格尔的诗思哲语,对人性的审美价值进行有效剖析,富有象征意味的结尾升华照应主题,结构严谨,韵味悠长。美中不足是中间论述事例略少,个别语句略显生涩。