（鄂尔多斯专版）2020中考英语复习方案第三篇话题写作妙解话题写作（一）人物故事（介绍）课件.pptx 20页

话题写作（一）人物故事(介绍)第三篇话题写作妙解 【话题点睛】人物故事类的书面表达一般是针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友来设置试题,要求考生对人物进行描写。主要涉及对人物的外貌、性格、爱好、经历、变化等的描写以及发表自己对此人物的看法等。此类试题通常以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。 1.MyfriendJennycomesfromNewYork.2.Shehasaroundfaceandoftenwearsapairofglasses.3.Heoftenhelpshisclassmateswiththehomework,andalsohelpsthepeopleintrouble.4.I"llnevergiveupwhenIfaceanydifficulty.5.She"satallgirlwithbigeyesandshehaslongblackhair.常用表达 6.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.7.WheneverIthinkofher,astrongfeelingofjoycanalwaysfillmyheart!8.Theherowonhighpraisefromthepublic.9.Shewearsglassesandoftengetsdressedindifferentstylesofclothes.10.She"ssokindandfriendlythatshemakesfriendswitheachofherstudents. 基础写作根据汉语提示完成句子。1.Ihope(成为好朋友)withyou.2.He"s(最伟大的……之一)basketballplayers.3.She"sgoodat(弹吉他).4.Jane(喜欢读书)anddrawing.tobegoodfriendsoneofthegreatestplayingtheguitarenjoysreadingbooks 5.Lindawantstobeanartistwhenshe(长大).6.Weshould(尽我们最大努力)tohelpthosewhoareinneed.7.I"m(幸运地拥有)suchagoodfriend.8.Theyalways(首先想到别人)andhelpthemasmuchaspossible.growsuptry/doourbestluckytohavethinkofothersfirst 每个人的一生中都会有令自己难忘的人。回想一下自己的成长过程,对你影响最深的老师是谁?请你根据以下要点提示,以“TheNicestTeacherinMyHeart”为题,写一篇英语短文。典例分析subjectChinese/math/English…appearance(外貌)tall/short/ofmediumheight/heavy/thin/…personality(性格)friendly/kind/popular/lovetosmile…reasons(原因)doagoodjob/bestrictwith/belikeamother/father/encouragemeto…其他… TheNicestTeacherinMyHeartJuniorhighschooldayswillbeover,andIhavesomespecialmemories.Oneofthemisaboutateacher.Inmyheart, 【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:对老师的描写,文章主要有4个要点:哪科的老师是你最喜欢的老师、对老师外貌的描写、对老师性格的描写、喜欢这位老师的原因;2.确定人称:第一人称为主;3.确定时态:一般现在时为主,描述老师过去曾经帮助自己的例子,应用一般过去时。 【写作架构】 【佳作欣赏】TheNicestTeacherinMyHeartJuniorhighschooldayswillbeover,andIhavesomespecialmemories.Oneofthemisaboutateacher.Inmyheart,Mr.Wang,myEnglishteacher,isthenicestteacher.Heisofmediumheight.Wethinkheisveryhandsome.Heimpressesmewithafriendly,kindandhard-workingteacher.HeisstrictwithusinEnglish.HehelpsuswithEnglishnotonlyinclassbutalsoafterclass.Abouttwoyearsago,Mr.WangnoticedthatIwasworriedaboutmypoorpronunciation.Soheoffered mesomeadviceandencouragedmetoimproveit.Healsogavemechancestospeakasmuchaspossibleinclass.Withhishelp,mypronunciationhasgreatlyimproved.ImustsaymanythankstoMr.Wang.Iwishhimahealthyandhappylifeinthefuture. 【名师点评】1.根据表格提示,对各个要点进行描述,语言精练、地道。2.句式、短语的多样化:含有think的主从复合句,that引导的宾语从句,so引导的结果状语从句等;短语bestrictwith,beworriedabout,notonly…butalso…等。句式及短语的适当使用,凸显出作者较好的英语语言功底。 A[2020·原创]第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2022年2月在中国举行。假设你是李华,希望成为一名奥运会志愿者。请根据下面表格中的内容提示,用英语给组委会写一封申请信。实战演练优势擅长英语爱好体育,有相关的经历乐于助人,善于合作……(补充1-2点)承诺提供优质的服务 [要求](1)用上所给要点,并适当发挥;(2)语言准确,行文流畅;(3)词数:80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.I"mverygladthatthe24thWinterOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.I"dliketobeavolunteerfortheGames.I"mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua Onepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.I"mverygladthatthe24thWinterOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.I"dliketobeavolunteerfortheGames.I"magirlof15,amiddleschoolstudent.IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames.Firstofall,I"mgoodatEnglishandIcanspeakEnglishwell.Second,IlikesportsandIworkedasavolunteeratseveralgreatgamesinmycountrybefore.Mostimportantly,I"malwaysreadytohelpothersandgoodatworkingwithothers.What"smore,I"macarefulgirlandIcandotheworkverycarefully. IpromiseI"lltrytooffermybestservicetothepeopleattheGames.IwouldbeveryhappyifIcouldbechosenasavolunteer.I"mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua B假如你叫李华,就读于某外国语学校。你们学校将选派学生代表去伦敦孔子学院参加文化交流活动。请根据以下思维导图提示,用英语给项目负责人写一封自荐信。 [注意](1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥(开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;(3)请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名;(4)词数:80左右。DearSir,IamastudentofClassSeven,GradeNine.Yourssincerely,LiHua Onepossibleversion:DearSir,IamastudentofClassSeven,GradeNine.IhopethatIcantakepartintheactivity.Iamoutgoing,helpfulandalwaysreadytohelpothers.MyoralEnglishisverygood,soIcancommunicatewithforeignersclearlyandeasily.IamcrazyaboutChinesetraditionalculture.I"mabigfanofBeijingOpera.AndI"mgoodatpapercutting.What"smore,Icanperformwushuverywell.Icanshareallthesethingswiththeforeignersthere.IbelievethatifIhavegotthechance,Icandowell.I"mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua