英语人教版八年级上册人物故事.ppt 22页

writing let"senjoyavideo Let’slearnhowtointroducesomeone 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇常用表达1．MyfriendJennycomesfromNewYork.2．Shehasaroundfaceandoftenwearsapairofglasses.3．Heoftenhelpshisclassmateswiththehomework,andalsohelpsthepeopleintrouble.4．I"llnevergiveupwhenIfaceanydifficulties.5．She"satallgirlwithbigeyesandshehaslongblackhair.话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇6．Shegetsonwellwithfriends.7．Ihopewecanbegoodfriends.8．He"sveryoutgoingandbrave.9．Inhersparetime,sheloveslisteningtomusic.10．He"soneofthemostpopularmoviestarsintheworld.话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇典型例题在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“MyFriendDaniel”的短文。注意：1.词数：80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2．文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇典型例题在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“MyFriendDaniel”的短文。注意：1.词数：80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2．文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇MyFriendDanielMyfriendDanielcomesfromBeijingSunshineSecondarySchool.He__________________________________________【思路点拨】1．找出关键点：外貌、爱好、性格特征；2．列出提纲。根据以上三个方面简单列出提纲；3．明确时态：主要使用一般现在时；4．确定人称：第三人称；话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇5．重点词汇及句型：(1)round,dislike,personalities,helpful,creative,generous,apairof,sharewith,getalongwith,helpsb.(to)do,bewillingtodo,wanttodo。(2)由连词and和but引导的并列句。话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇【写作模板】话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇【佳作欣赏】MyFriendDanielMyfriendDanielcomesfromBeijingSunshineSecondarySchool.Hehasaroundfaceandoftenwearsapairofglasses.Heisgoodatplayingcomputergames,buthedislikessports.Hehasmanygoodpersonalities.Heishelpful.Heoftenhelpshisclassmateswiththehomework,andalsohelpstheoldcrosstheroad.Heiskindtoothers.HeworksattheHelpingHandsClub.Heiswillingtohelpthepeopleinneed.Heisalsocreative.Forexample,hecreatesaTVprogram.Heisgeneroustohisfriends.Helikestosharehisthingswiththem.SoIwanttobeapersonlikeDanielandgetalongwellwitheveryone.话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇【佳作欣赏】MyFriendDanielMyfriendDanielcomesfromBeijingSunshineSecondarySchool.Hehasaroundfaceandoftenwearsapairofglasses.Heisgoodatplayingcomputergames,buthedislikessports.Hehasmanygoodpersonalities.Heishelpful.Heoftenhelpshisclassmateswiththehomework,andalsohelpstheoldcrosstheroad.Heiskindtoothers.HeworksattheHelpingHandsClub.Heiswillingtohelpthepeopleinneed.Heisalsocreative.Forexample,hecreatesaTVprogram.Heisgeneroustohisfriends.Helikestosharehisthingswiththem.SoIwanttobeapersonlikeDanielandgetalongwellwitheveryone.话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇【名师点评】1．使用的高级词汇：dislike,personalities,creative,create,generous等。2．运用了丰富的短语描写人物的外貌与性格特征。例如，apairof,bekindto,bewillingto等。3．举例说明，使文章生动：Forexample,hecreats…。4．结合要点，适当发挥：Heisgenerousto…。话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇实战演练2016·巴中用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，用无形的精神感染身边的每一个人——这就是“阳光少年”。请你以“ASunshineTeenager”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”高飞。要点：1．善良友好，乐于助人(如：去敬老院为老人读报，打扫房间，洗衣服)；2．不怕困难，勤奋好学，喜欢读书；3．性格外向，积极参加各种文体活动(如：与同学踢球，参加各种俱乐部)。话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇要求：1．短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐词翻译；2．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：getonwellwith;takeanactivepartinASunshineTeenagerHello!I"mLiMing.Ourschoolhadanactivity“LearnfromSunshineTeenagers”.Fromthenon,therearemanysunshineteenagersaroundus.GaoFeiisoneofthem.He________________________________________________________________________________________________________GaoFeiisagoodsunshineteenager.Ishouldlearnfromhim.话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 whatdoyoulearntoday？ checkandpolishyourarticalwithyourpartner thankyouforyourlistening 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇Onepossibleversion:A__S_u_n_s_h_i_n_e_T_e_e_n_a_g_e_r___________________________________H_e_l_lo_!__I"_m__L_i__M_i_n_g_._O__u_r_s_c_h_o_o_l_h_a_d__a_n_a_c_t_iv_i_t_y_“_L_e_a_r_n_______f_ro_m___S_u_n_s_h_in_e__T_e_e_n_a_g_e_r_s”_._F__r_o_m__th_e_n__o_n_,_t_h_e_r_e_a_r_e_m__a_n_y____s_u_n_s_h_in_e__t_ee_n_a_g_e_r_s_a_r_o_u_n__d_u_s_.___________________________G_a_o__F_e_i_i_s_o_n_e_o_f__th_e_m__._H__e_is__a_k_i_n_d__a_n_d_f_r_ie_n_d__ly__b_o_y_w__h_o____g_e_ts__o_n_w__e_ll_w__it_h__o_th_e_r_s_._H_e__u_s_u_a_ll_y_g_o_e_s__to__th__e_O__ld__P_e_o_p_le____H_o_m__e__to__r_ea_d__s_o_m_e__n_e_w_s_p_a_p_e_r_s_t_o__th_e__o_ld__p_e_o_p_l_e,_c_l_e_a_n_t_h_e___r_o_o_m_s__a_n_d_d__o_s_o_m_e__w_a_s_h_i_n_g_._B_e_s_id__es_,_h_e__is_n_"_t_a_f_ra_i_d__o_f______d_i_ff_ic_u_l_t_y_._W__h_e_n_e_v_er__h_e_m__e_e_ts__tr_o_u_b_l_e_s_,_h_e_t_r_ie_s_t_o__d_e_a_l_w_i_th_话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练 话题写作(一)┃人物故事篇t_h_e_m__._H_e_n__o_t_o_n_ly__w_o_r_k_s__h_a_r_d_b_u_t__a_ls_o_l_i_k_e_s_r_e_a_d_in_g_._A__ls_o_,__h__e_w_a_s__so__o_u_t_g_o_in_g__t_h_a_t_h_e_t_a_k_e_s_a_n__a_c_ti_v_e_p__ar_t__in__a_ll_k_i_n_d_s___o_f__sc_h_o_o_l_a_c_t_i_v_it_ie_s_s_u_c_h__a_s_p_l_a_y_in_g__f_o_o_tb_a_l_l_w_i_t_h_h_i_s_________c_l_a_s_sm__a_t_e_s_a_n_d__jo_i_n_i_n_g_l_o_ts__o_f_c_lu_b_s_.______________________G__a_o_F__e_i_is_a__g_o_o_d__su_n__sh_i_n_e__te_e_n_a_g_e_r_._I_s_h_o_u_l_d_l_e_a_rn__f_r_o_m_____h__im__.___________________________________________________________________________________________________话题点睛常用表达基础写作典型例题实战演练