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高考英语满分作文50篇[高考英语满分作文必背]　　假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1．词数：100左右：2．参考词汇：房租—Tent.　　I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.Buscantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyour needs.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.　　Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!　　Allthebest!　　Yours,　　LiHua满分理由　　本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。DearBob,　　WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.　　IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.　　Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.Justtakethebusatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,　　seeyou.　　Bestwishes!　　Yours,　　LiHua 满分理由　　本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。DearBob,　　Howareyouthesedays?　　I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisnearthebusstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.　　Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.　　Yours,　　LiHua满分理由　　本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60％的同学认为40％的同学认为1．不应该收门票 2公园是公众休闲的地方3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1．应收门票，但票价不要太高2．支付园林工人工资3．购新花木注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。3．参考词汇：门票---entrancefeeDearEditor．I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks．Deareditor,　　I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeedonotmeetpeople’sexpectations,foraparkisconsideredtobeaplacewherethepubliccanhaveagoodtimewhentheyarenotbusyeitherathomeoratwork.Ifanentrancefeemustbepaidbythevisitorsforapark,itwillbenecessarytobuildagateandsurroundingwalls.Intheendacitywilltakeonabadlook.40%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeecanbeaccepted,butitmustnotbetooexpensive.Themoneyfromticketsellingcanbeusedforpayingthegardenersintheparkandbuyingsomeotherkindsofflowersand trees.　　Withregardtomyself,Ithinkanentrancefeeisuseful,foritcanbeusedtoprotectapark.Dowesharethesameopinion,deareditor?　　Yourstruly,　　LiHuaDeareditor,　　I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Sixtystudentsoutofonehundredthinkthatanentrancefeeshouldnotbeboughtbeforeoneentersapark,foritisaplaceforthepublictogotowhentheyarefree.Ifaticketmustbebought,agateandwallshavetobebuiltforapark,whichwillmakeacitylookugly.Fortystudentsoutofonehundredthinkthatanentrancefeeshouldbeboughtbeforeoneentersapark,butthatthepriceoftheticketshouldbereasonable.Moneythatisgotfromticketsellingcanbeusedtopaythegardeningworkersandbuydifferentkindsofflowersandtrees.Asformyself,Ireallythinkparksaregoodplacestogotoatweekendsandonholidays.Atthesametime,we,asvisitors,shouldpaytheentrancefeewhenwe enterapark.Afterall,ittakesalotofmoneytomaintainaparkingoodworkingorder.Doyouagreewithme,deareditor?　　Yourstruly,　　LiHua20XX年上海高考英语作文范文　March21,20XXDearCathy,Iamwritingtoyoutosharemyopinionsonfashionwithyou,forIhavejustheardthatyouweredepressedbecauseyoucouldn’taffordthebestshallsaythatitisnaturalforeveryonetopaymuchemphasisonhisownimage.Anditistruethatstylishclothes,shoesorsomethinglikethosewillmakeonemorefashionableandeye-catching.However,everybodyhashisownfamilybackground,anditisreallyextravagantforyoutobuythefamouspands.Besides,itwillalsoaddtotheburdenofyour’smore,beautyisjustskindeep.Therearemanythingswhichcanmakeyoupopularwithothersexceptfashion.Agreatamountofknowledge,noblecharacterandawarmheartwillsurelywinothers’respectandadmiration.Goodqualitiesarethetreasureinyourlifewhichismorevaluablethananythingyoujudgeapersonby theappearance.Ihopethatyouwillrememberthesayingandbecomeashappyasyouusedto,Jane