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真题：DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语(论坛)学习中不重视拼写，2.出现这种现象的原因是…3.为了改变这种状况，我认为….满分范文：DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpellingNowadays,studentsattachlessimportancetothespellingofwordsintheprocessofEnglishstudy.Thisphenomenongreatlyinfluencesstudents’writingandbringsonworriesamongteachers.Therearepossiblythreereasonscontributingtothisphenomenon.First,exam-orientededucationmakesthestudentspaylessattentiontospelling.Second,someteachersshouldalsoberesponsibleforitbecausetheydon’temphasizetheimportanceofspellingduringteaching.Lastbutnotleast,somestudentsaretoolazytorecitewords.SincespellingisoneofthemostimportantfactorsinEnglishstudy,dueattentionshouldbegiventoit.Asforme,Ithink,first,examsshouldbemodifiedtoaddsomefactorsintoit,whichwouldhelpstudentspaymoreattentiontospelling.Then,schoolsshouldalsoseteffectivemechanismstohelpteachersaswellasthestudentstorealizetheimportance.Finally,forstudentsthemselves,theycan,throughotherways,makethembeinterestedinwordspelling.Onlybythesecanwesurlyrealizetheimportanceofspellingandmakeimprovement.DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1．如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2．出现这种现象的原因3．我认为……（措施）【2010年6月19日英语四级作文范文（昂立版）】Nowadaysfewerandfewerstudentspayattentiontotheirword-spelling.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,thereisadramaticincreaseinthenumberofstudentswhocanonlyimitatethepronunciationofawordbutbeincapableofspellingit.InthisessayIwilldiscussthefactorsofthisphenomenonandoffermyownviewonit.Thereareanumberoffactorscanbeaccountableforthissituation.OneofthemostcommonfactorsisthatfewerandfewerstudentsneedtowriteEnglishessays.Besides,thegoalofmoststudentstolearnEnglishistospeakitandpasstheexaminationwhichmeanstheyjustneedtoselectthesimilarwordsaccordingtothelisteningmaterialsandpassages.Perhapsthemostcontributingfactoristhewideuseofelectronicdevicessuchase-dictionariesandcomputersandstudentsnolongerneedtocorrectthewordsbythemselves. AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ifirmlyarguethatweneedtoattachgreatimportancetoword-spelling.Tothestudents,theyshouldwriteEnglishasmuchastheycan.Meanwhile,totheteachers,thedictationsshouldbereinforcedintheclass.DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.这种现象导致的结果ItisbecomingincreasinglycommonthatlotsofstudentsdonotthinkspellingisthemajorpointofmasteringgoodEnglish.Throughtalkingwiththem,Iawareofthefactthatcommonthinkingleadedtothisphenomenonisthat,thestudentsonlywanttogetgoodscoresfromtheirtests,whichGrammarskillsarerequiredmorethanspelling.DonotmentionthatsomeofthestudentsonlywanttoimprovetheirspokenEnglishtocommunicate,forasimplereasonthatthiscanmakethemsoundcool.Differentwordsstandsfordifferentmeanings.AswearegoingtouseEnglishinourdailylife,tounderstanddifferentsignsandads,evenwhenwearereadingnewspapers,goodspellingskillsensureustogetthecorrectinformation’sandpreventsmisunderstandingsfromhappening.Themostimportantpointthatstudentsmightnotseeisthatspellingskillcanmakethempronouncewell,becausedifferentpronunciationcomesfromdifferentspellings.1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.这种现象导致的结果DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpellingWhatishotfor2010inourcolleges?Itisthespellingmistakes.Countlessstudentslackdueattentiontospelling.Takingalookaround,wecanfindexamplestoonumeroustolist,theonemaybe“challenge”.Freshmanandsophomorealmostwritethiswordas“challenge”.Howcarelesstheyare!Whysuchaphenomenonsweepseveryuniversity?Someexpertsattributeittostudents’inattention,becausestudentsalwayspaynoattentiontospelling.However,otherexpertsargue,theteachersshouldbeblamedforthissituation.Inmyopinion,itisfarbeyondanyreasonabledoubtthatbothofthemshouldexertthemselvestochangethespellingmistakes.Thespreadingofthespellingmistakeshasextremelynegativeeffectsontheeducation.Foronething,thespecialagethatnoneofstudentscanspellcorrectlywillcomesoon.Foranother,whilecommunicatingwithforeigners,wewillbelaughedatthespellingmistakesmadebyourselves.Asaresult,dueattentionshouldbegiventospellingimmediately. 2002年1月CET作文题目 　　四级作文题： 　　Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampusYoushouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow: 　　假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼有而有之。 　　January12th,2002 　　DearMr.President, 　　范文： 　　January12th,2002 　　DearMr.President, 　　I’mveryluckytoattendthisworld-famousuniversity,butI’mafraidI’mnotcontentwiththecanteenserviceoncampus. 　　Firstly,thequalityofthedishesshouldbeimproved.Undoubtedly,therearealotofdeliciousdishes,butalltheyearround,theyarethesame.Moreandmorestudentsarecomplainingabouteatingthesamefoodeachday.SoIthink themosturgentproblemisvariety. 　　Secondly,thepriceisabittoohigh.Manyofushopethatthecanteencanprovideuswithnotonlydeliciousbutalsocheaperfood. 　　Finally,theenvironmentissonoisythatwecan’tenjoyourmealsingoodmood.Isuggestthattherebesomesoftmusictohelpusrelax. 　　Thesesuggestionsarenotjustofmyown,butalsoofmayotherstudents.Wehopeourrespectablepresidentwillpayattentiontooursuggestions. 　　Bytheway,thecanteenworkersareverypatientandalwayssmiling.SoIthinkifouruniversityoffersthembetterconditions,theywillofferusbetterservice. 　　Bestwishes,　1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间:1990年（2hours）、1995年(4hours)、2002年(14hours)，请描述其变化；  　　2.请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；  　　3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。  　　StudentUseofComputers  　　范文：  　　Studentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays.Readingthischart,wecanfindthattheaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhasincreasedsharply.In1990,itwaslessthan2hours;andin1995,itincreasedtoalmost4hours;whilein2000,thenumbersoaredto20hours.  　　Obviouslycomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.First,computersfacilitateusinmoreaspectsoflife.Also,thefastdevelopmentoftheInternetenlargesourdemandsforusingcomputers.WecaneasilycontactwithfriendsinremoteplacesthroughtheInternet.Besides,thepricesofcomputersaregettinglowerandlower,whichenablesmorestudentstopurchasethem.  　　Alongwiththetimespentoncomputers,therearisesomeproblems.ThemostseriousoneisthatmanystudentsarespendingsomuchtimeplayingPCgamessothattheyignoretheirstudies.Itisurgenttoletthestudentsusecomputersinaproperway.1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实 　　ItPaystoBeHonest 　　范文：    Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue,therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety.Forexample,somebusinessmensellfakeproducttotheirconsumers;somestudentscheatintheexams.    Dishonestpeopleareshort-sighted.Thosewhosellfakeproductsmaymakemoneyatfirst,butconsumerswon’tbuytheirproductsanymore.Asaresult,theywilllosetheirfortuneorevenbesenttoprison.Bycontrast,honestpeoplegainalot.    Thosewhoalwaystelltruthorkeeptotheirpromisenotonlyletotherstrustthembutgainrespectfromotherpeopleaswell.Suchpersonsaresuretohavealotofgoodfriends.Becausetheyaretrustableandrespectable,everyoneiseagertomakefriendswiththem,Besides,itiseasierforapersonwithagoodrecordtogetagoodjob.Generallyspeaking,everyemployerwantshisemployeestobehonest.Sowecansaythatanyonewhoishonestwillbepaidbacklater.  Inaword,honestywinstrust,respectandhonor.Soitisimportantthatweshouldbehonest.假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。 　　见证书须包括以下几点： 　　1、车祸发生的时间及地点 　　2、你所见到的车祸情况 　　3、你对车祸原因的分析 　　AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident 　　范文：     MynameisLiming.Iamstudyingatcollege.AweekagoIsawatrafficaccident,whichisstillvividinmymind.    Itwasatabout9:00onSaturdaymorning,June15th,whenIwentoutoftheuniversitytovisitafriendofmineatanotheruniversity.IwaswalkingleisurelyonthesidewalkwhenIheardaloudcrashoftwovehiclesjustattheT-junctionabout10metersaway.Twotaxiscrashedtogether.Itwasatrafficaccident. Iwentupandfoundthatthetwotaxiswerebadlydamaged.Bothhoofswereoutofshape.Onedoorofacarwasknockedoffandlyingontheroad.Onedriverwasbloodingandanotherwasshutinthetaxi.Somepeopleweretryingtohelpthedrivergetoutofthedamagedcar.Onemanwascallingtothetrafficpolicemanstation.Alotofcarswerejammedontheroad.    Fromthestoppingtrackontheroad,itisclearthatthetwotaxisweredrivingtoofast.Butitisjustoneofthereasons.Inmyopinion,thetaxidriversareeagertotakemorepassengersandmakealittlemoremoney.Ontheotherhand,bothdriversdon’tshowconcernforoneanother.Bothofthemwantedtoruninfrontofanother.Therefore,theaccidentisinevitable.Sofar,weshouldletthedriverskeepitintheirmindthatalittleslower,alittlesafer.Takingcareofother’slivesmeanstakingcareofyourownlife.1．一次性塑料袋给人们生活带来便利。广为使用。 2．由此带来的问题，举例子。  3．限制使用塑料袋的意义，理论与实际相结合。  　　范文： 　　Inmodernworld,DisposableplasticbagswereoncewidelyusedinChina.Peopleusedtotakeitforshoppingandshoppingassistantsoftenprovidedfreeplasticbagsforourconvenience.Forawhile,lifewithoutthemseemedunimaginableformostofus. 　　However,disposableplasticbagsdobringseveredamagetoourenvironmentandlotofharmstolife.Firstandforemost,theyareabandonedeverywhere.Itcannotbeabsorbedwhichwillhavegreatinfluencefortheenvironment.Finallythepollutionbroughtbyplasticthreattoourspecieslife. 　　Tosumup,itismeaningfultolimittheuseofdisposableplastic.It’ssignificantthatourgovernmenthasbannedtheuseofdisposableplasticbagsofficially,andpeoplewillbechargedfortheuseofsuchbags.Thisactionisreducingtheconsumptionofbagstoagreatextent. 　　Everyoneinthissocietyshouldcontributesomeefforttotheimprovementoftheenvironment.Weshouldprotectourearthandlivingenvironmenttomakeabetterlife.1.娱乐活动多种多样2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能有危害性3.作为大学生我们的看法奥运年的第一次四级考试已经淡淡地结束了，这“淡淡地”一词主要体现在其写作部分，它没有命制地震、奥运以及限塑令相关的内容，而这一点早已经在我的意料之中了，因为四六级考试的作文部分与考研的政治不同，它不会考查时政热点的内容。这次四级作文的话题内容是娱乐活动。至于考题类型，严格地说它是属于议论文当中的“权衡利弊”考题。在这儿，我有必要为同学们屡清一下四六级写作考题的类型，以避免同学备考时迷茫。四六级考试的写作部分按大类分为三个类型：议论文、应用文、记叙文。而，其又分为①综合评述（原因、因素、影响、措施）、②正反论述（两种不同观点：一些人认为……；另外一些人认为……）、③权衡利弊（事物有好和坏的一面，如何看待）、④择优比较（两个事物进行选择，选择最好的一个）、⑤谚语警句（阐述某个谚语警句）；而应用文又分为书信letter和一般应用文（如 poster、announcement）；记叙文则分为纯记叙文和夹叙夹议的文章。权衡利弊类型的文章之前在四级中一共就出现过两次：93年1月关于运动的积极因素和消极因素；96年1月关于双休日的好处和问题，而六级考试则没考查过这个类型。我在美森强化班和冲刺班都曾重点讲解过此类题型的段落布局和关键句型。权衡利弊类作文的段落布局：段落布局：第一段：引出谈论的事物及话题第二段：①任何事物都有两个方面②分清主次地列明优点与缺点第三段：表明自己的观点在表达任何事物都有两个方面的时候有一个很重要而常见的句型：Everythinghastwosidesjustlikeacoinandisnoexception.此外，在描述事物优点与缺点时，同学不要忘了要使用结构性连接词，比如onthecontrary等。其次，就话题内容而言，在描述娱乐活动益处时，我敢说美森的学员肯定都能够张口就来：enrichourlives,broadenourhorizons,andcultivateourmind（丰富人们生活、开拓人们视野、陶冶人们的情操）。而关于娱乐活动的表达，同学也应该不断地运用课上讲过的“娱乐”进行同义词替换：entertainment/recreational/amusementactivities.最后，我再强调一下文章的第一段，它的写法要突出“新”字，就这篇作文而言，内容要点中已经指出“各种各样”，因此，我们可以采用举例法来开始。范文：Withthedramaticdevelopmentofoursocietyandourlivingstandard,thereareavarietyofrecreationalactivitiescomingtoourlives.SomemaygotoKTVwiththeirfriendsonweekendstogetrelaxedafterfive-dayintensework.Meanwhile,othersmightchoosetosurftheinternettokilltimeandappreciatevastresourcesontheinternet.Everythinghastwosidesjustlikeacoin,andentertainmentisnoexception.Ontheonehand,amusementactivitiescanenrichourlives,broadenourhorizon,andcultivateourmind.Ontheotherhand,wecouldwastedandourmindcontaminatedifwefailtoapproachrecreationproperly.Asfarascollegestudentsareconcerned,wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofthebenefitsfromdiverseentertainmentactivities.Inaddition,itisessentialtobeself-disciplinedandsteerclearoftheadverseinfluences.　　Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofElectivecoursestochoose.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1、各大学开设了多种多样的选修课2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3、以你自己为例……　　备受瞩目的07年12月四级考试作文题目已经悄然地揭开了面纱，是关于大学生选课的综合评述类议论文。美森教育的四级强化班上，我提出了这次四级考试作文的类型四大重点之一就是阐述现象原因影响等的综合评述类议论文。而考前一周的冲刺班上我又将四大重点缩减到综合论述和夹叙夹议的两大黄金题型。如果纵观历年四六级考试作文类型，综合评论是出现频率最高的题型，因为这类题型最容易接近热点，测试学生综合写作能力的。而四级而言，从03年之后只出现过一次这类题型，因此此次题型的回归对于深入研究四级考试的人来说是不难预测的。　　这次四级作文的命题话题十分接近于06年6月24日新四级的作文话题，都是围绕大学校园的课程。所以说，这次四级写作的话题不难，学生是有思路，有话可说。那么，文章的段落布局将会是决定写作成败的关键之处。　　综合评述类议论文也是要符合四级考试写作要求，三段式的，同时内容要点就可以看作是分段点，即第一段写第一点，第二段写第二点，第三段完成第三点。不过，每一段的写作方法是有要求的：　　第一段，即议论文当中的引言段，要引入文章所谈论的话题“多种多样的选修课”　　第二段，即议论文当中的主体段，谈论文章讨论的分论点，即“选择不同选修课的各种原因”　　第三段，即议论文当中的结论段，总结文章，表达观点，即“以自己为例……” 　　最后，我要强调的是，同学在写第一段(引言段)时，一定要突出“异”字，引入话题的方法要力求新颖，和他人不同，给阅卷老师以新鲜感。比如说，对于此次作文，第一段中存在“多种多样”，那么我们就可以尝试用举例法来引入话题。再者，第二段阐述原因时切忌直接展开原因的论述，而要先“引入”，再展开阐述。　　Electivecoursestochoose　　Withtheremarkableeducationalreformandtheincreasingstudents’demand,universitiesstrivetoofferavarietyofelectivecoursesforstudentstochoose.Somehigherinstitutesprovidetheoptionalcourseofcross-culturalcommunication,andsomecollegeshavecomputerscienceonthecurriculumofelectivecourses　　Therearenumerousreasonsforstudents’selectionofthecourses,andIwouldliketoexploreafewofthemostsignificantoneshere.Inthefirstplace,studentstendtotakepersonalinterestintoconsiderationwhentheyoptforanelectivecourse.Possibly,that’swhycross-culturalcommunicationcourseissoprevailingoncampus.Additionally,someundergraduatesattendcertainoptionalcoursesfortheircareerprospectsandfuturedevelopment.Lastbutnotleast,tomakeupfortheirrequiredcreditsisanotheruniversalreasonasstudentsselectacourseatrandom.　　AsfarasIamconcerned,pickingupanelectivecourse,Iaminclinedtogiveprioritytopersonalinterest.IamtakinggeographicresearchanddiscoverycourseinthatI’vebeengreatlykeenonsciencesinceIwasakid.