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1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？2.也会带来一些问题；3.你的看法？点评：2009年的四级考试作文沿袭了近几年四级作文的特点，即问题解决型+观点对比型的结合。属社会类话题，纵观各个辅导机构的预测作文，没有人预测博物馆的话题。但是就今年的考题形式而言，三个段落的写法在课堂上都讲到了。下面是分析：按照课堂所讲审题阶段应该关注英文标题和汉语提纲，即：1）FreeAdmissiontoMuseums2）汉语提纲3条。从中可知，核心话题是freeadmission,从三个方面来探讨这一话题即可。根据"先结构后表达"的原则安排段落结构即可做到结构清晰：先结构：1、段写该现象的目的（其实就是好处）；2、段写问题（即负面影响）；3、段写看法（或解决措施）后表达：确定好各段结构之后，利用3分钟时间联想各部分可以选用的句式和词汇表达，并以关键词的形式列出以帮助自己理顺写作的思维。　　写作完成之后，检查。下面为用课堂所讲套路写的简易版本，供大家参考。FreeAdmissiontoMuseums首段版本1：Inrecentyears,anincreasingnumberofmuseumsbecomefreetothepublic.（或：Itcanbenoticedthat...）Thereareseveralaimsforthisphenomenon,butthefollowingmaybethemostcritical.Freeadmissionenablespeople,especiallystudents,tohavemoreopportunitiestovisitmuseums,wheretheycanacquireknowledgeofhistory,arts,customsandsoforth.版本2:AccordingtoarecentsurveybyChinaDaily,about84.3%ofmuseumsbecomefreetothepublic.Bydoingso,museumsattractmillionsofpeopletovisiteveryday.Inaddition,thevisitors,especiallystudents,broadentheirhorizonsandenlargetheirscopeofknowledge.中间段:Thereare,however,severalnegativeeffectswhichwecannotturnablindeyeto.Firstly,owingtofreeadmission,alargenumberofvisitorswillvisitmuseums.Consequently,themuseummaybecometoocrowded.Evenworse,freeadmissionmayresultinsomefinancialproblems.Forinstance,museumworkerscanhardlygetenoughsalary.Lastbutnotleast,thepreservationofculturalheritagemaybeimpaired.尾段： 版本1：(课堂讲过的)Personally,Iamconvincedthatfreeadmissiontomuseumisatwo-edgedsword,whichpresentsusbothadvantages?andtroubles.Thebestpolicy,asIseeit,istomaximizethebenefitsandminimizethenegativeinfluences.版本2：Frommypointofview,itishightimethatwetookmeasurestoeliminatethenegativeimpacts.Firstly,regulationsshouldbeworkedouttolimitthenumberofvisitorstomuseumeveryday.Secondly,itisadvisableforgovernmenttoofferfinancialassistancetomuseums.Onlyinthiswaycanmuseumsprovideservicetopublicinabetterway.FreeAdmissiontomuseums越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？也会带来一些问题；你的看法？FreeAdmissiontoMuseums?Nowadays,alotofmuseumsopentothepublicforfree,andalotofpeopleareattractedtogothere.However,italsobroughtsomeunexpectedproblems.Atpresent,peoplecangetknowledgefrommanywayslikelibraries,internet,andothersources.However,thereisalsomuchinformationthatpeoplecannotgetfromtheaboveways.Freeadmissionmuseumssupplymorechancesforthepublictogetknowledgethatcannotbeeasilyaccessed.Peoplecanlearnmorethingsabouthistory,art,scienceandsoon.Although,thiskindofpolicybroughtmuchconveniencetothepublic,italsocausedsomeproblems.Forexample,beggarsandshabby-dressedpeoplemayenterthemuseumsandcausebadreputationamongthepublic;alongwiththeincreasingnumberofpeoplegettingintomuseums,therewillbenoenoughserviceestablishmentstomeettherequirements;besides,underthepolicyoffreeadmission,theculturalrelicsdisplayedtheremaybeinevitablybrokenordamagedbythecrowds.Moreover,thecrowdsinthemuseumsmayalsocausesecurityproblems.Inmyopinion,freeadmissionisagoodpolicyforthepublic,anditbringsthepublicmuchconvenience.But,weshouldalsotakepossiblemeasurestoprotecttheculturalrelicsandmaintaintheorderofspot.Besides,wecanalsotakethepolicyofgivingfreeadmissionfirsttochildren,thentotheretiredperson,andlasttothepublic.Ithink,thismayhelptosolvetheproblems.明星代言问题 OntheCelebritySpokesperson　　Currently,wecouldhardlyliveasingledaywithoutseeingacelebrityspokespersonpromotingaproductorasocialcampaignonTV,netorothermedia.Thisisanintenselypopulartrendthatwecannotfailtonotice.　　Thereisnodoubtthatthecelebrityspokespeoplecouldboostthesaleofaproduct.Ahostofcelebrityspokespersons,however,haveemergedasthemarketingtoolofsomecompanies,evencompaniesproducingandsellingfakeandinferioritems.Thiskindofbehaviorhasproducednegativeimpactsonconsumersandwholesociety,whichshouldbeseverelycriticizedandpenalized.Ofcourse,asisknowntoall,everythinghasbothbrightanddarksides.Somestars’endorsementofsocialactivitiesandpubliccampaignsraisespublicawareness,givingrisetochangesinpublicbehavior.Inthiscase,theyserveaspositiverolemodelsofthegeneralpublic.Tonameonlyonecase:PuCX,ahouseholdfigure,actingasthecelebrityspokesmanoftheChinaAIDSFoundation,contributesgreatlytothecauseofAIDSpreventionandcureinChina.　　关于选秀节目　　Overthepastcoupleofyears,avarietyoftalentshowshaveemergedonTVchannelsacrossthenation,fromSuperGirlstoHappyBoysandsoforth.Thistypeofentertainmentprogramisintenselypopular,especiallyamongyoungadultsandhasproducedprofoundimpactsontheirstudiesandlife。　　Thereareacoupleofreasonsbehindthetide.Tostartwith,youngfolksneedrolemodelstolearnfrom.Somanyofthemarecrazyforcontestantsparticipatingintheseprograms.ThisgivesrisetotheincreasingemergenceoftheseshowsbecauseTVnetworksnaturallyneedtocatertoyoungaudiences.Plus,thankstoeconomicandpoliticalreformscarriedoutbythegovernment,thiscropofyounggenerationhavemorefreedomanddesiretoexpressandshowcasethemselves.Therefore,agrowingnumberofyoungpeopledesiretogetinvolvedintheseshows。　　Thisisadivisivetopic.Onmypersonallevel,thetalentshowisasuperbmeansofrelaxingandamusingandcanhugelyrelieveourstrains.Ascollegestudents,however,wecouldnotaffordtoindulgeinthemandshouldbeawareoftheutmostimportanceofstudies。　　食品安全问题　　OntheFoodSecurity　　Overthepastcoupleofyears,severalcasesofthefoodscandalhavebeendisclosedonvariousmedia.Theproblemoffoodsecurityhasbecomeahotbuttonacrosssociety.Theprevalenceoffoodinsecurityhasgreatlyimpactedpublichealth,whichthegovernmentcouldnotaffordtoignore,accordingtotheonlineeditionofthePeopleDaily。 　　Thereareacoupleofdrivingforces,Iwouldargue,behindthisundesirabletide.First,inthecourseoftherapideconomicevolution,weignoremoraleducation,givingrisetotherisingrateoftheproblem.Moreimportantly,thelackofadequateregulationandpunishmentonthoseillegalproducersenforcesthetrend。AsConfuciusinstructed,itisbetterlatethannever.Promptandstrictmeasuresshouldbetakentoturnbackthiseviltrend.Thegovernmentshouldlaunchamassivemoralcampaigntoeducateallcitizensanddrawuptougherlawstocrackdownonthoseirresponsiblecorporationsandprohibitthemfromenteringthefoodindustryagain.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthroughourcombinedeffortsweareboundtoenjoymorerisk-freefoodsinthedaysahead。社会不文明现象　　OnUncivilizedBehaviors　　Wecannotfailtonoticethatcountlessuncivilizedbehaviorsexistinourdailylives,suchasspitting,talkingloudly,littering,sayingnastywordsinpublicplacesandsoforth.Allthesearebadmannersthatweshouldnotlosesightof.Asanancientlandenjoyingasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years,ChinaiswitnessingasurgeinimproperactsthateveryChinesecitizenshouldfeelashamedof.UncivilizedbehaviorsbyahostofChinesebothathomeandabroadhaveseriouslyaffectedChina’simage,accordingtoaneditorialpostedonPeopleDaily’sofficialwebsite。　　AsChinese,weshouldnotgetoffendedwhenotherspointoutourweaknessesbutshouldfocusmoreattentiononimprovingourselves.Weshouldstrivetoidentifythecausesofthoseimproperbehaviorsandfindwaystoeliminatethem.Thereareahostofcauses,Iwouldargue,behindthistrend.Tonameonlyone:thelackofmoraleducation.Thegovernmentshouldwageamassivemoralcampaigntofightagainstthistrendandweourselvesshouldendeavortobehavedecentlyinourdailylives.Ascollegestudentsofthenewage,weshouldtaketheleadingrole。　　感恩　　OnCultivatingtheSenseofGratitude　　Oncollegecampusesacrossthenation,thereisanoticeablephenomenonthatwecannotaffordtoignore:fartoomanyyoungcollegestudentslackthesenseofgratitude,oneofthecountlesstraditionalvirtuesofthisancientlandwithasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years.Theseyoungadultswerenotandarenotawareofthehugeimportanceofexpressinggratitudetothosewhooncehelpedthem,fromteacherstoparentsandsoforth。　　Personally,Ideemthattherootcauseofstudentswithoutagracefulheartisthatthey receiveaneducationnotvaluingthemoralsphere.Istronglybelievethatjointeffortsfromfolksacrosssocietyarethefinalremedyforthissocialheadache.Asyounguniversitystudentsofthenewera,weshouldmakeourowncontributionstothiscause.Imagineaworldwithoutthesenseofgratitude.Thiskindofworldisdoomedtofailure.Simplyput,weshouldjoinourhandstoheightenourawarenessoffosteringagracefulheart.Onlyinthiswaycanwebuildoursocietyintoaharmoniousone.Myfellowstudents,Ibegyoutoactfromnowon。大学生使用信用卡现象　　OnCreditCard　　Atpresent,awidevareityofcreditcardsissuedbymajorbanksandshoppingmallsarethrivingincollegesanduniversitiesacrossthenation,withamultitudeofcollegestudentsmakingupagrowingpopulationofcardholders.Indeed,oneoutoffivestudentsisestimatedtobeinpossessionofatleastonecreditcard,andthefigureisexpectedtobeonthesteadyincrese,thelatestdatapublishedbyYangtzeEveningPostsuggests。　　Likeanythingpriortotheemergenceofthissmallpieceofplastic,theincreasingpopularityofcreditcardoncampushasbothbrightanddarksides.Ontheonehand,youngadultsincollege,freefromthetroubleofpocketingaconsiderablesumofcash,couldenjoytheconvenienceofcreditcardsandpurchaseexpensivegoodsbyinstallments.Ontheotherhand,however,theirresponsibleandexcessiveuseofthecardsbytheseyoungsters,themajorityofwhomarefreshoutofmiddleschoolincapableofbudgetingtheirmoney,canmakethemheavilyindebtwhichwilltakethemyearstopayoff。　　Onmypersonallevel,whileenjoyingahostofconveniencesthecreditcardmaybring,wecouldn’taffordtoignoreaconspiciousfact:inmostcases,parentsareoursolefinancialsources.Insteadofspendingwithoutanyrestrict,wearesupposedtoputstudiesonthetopofouragendaandmoveourselvesbeyondheavydependenceuponourparents。开头Recently,theproblemof…hasarousedpeople’sconcern.最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.Internethasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.Nowadays,(overpopulation)hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface. 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.Itiscommonlybelievedthat…/Itisacommonbeliefthat…人们一般认为…Manypeopleinsistthat…很多人坚持认为…Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat…随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat…很多人似乎认为…引出不同观点:People’sviewson…varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat….However,othersbelievethat….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson…人们对…可能会有不同的见解.Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…关于….人们的观点大不相同.Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.结尾Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…Hence/Therefore,we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此,我们最好得出这样的结论… Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.Allinall,wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:Itishightimethatweputanendtothe(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.Itistimetotaketheadviceof…andtoputspecialemphasisontheimprovementof该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof…毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously,….Ifwewanttodosomething…,itisessentialthat…显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…Onlyinthiswaycanwe…只有这样,我们才能…Itmustberealizedthat…我们必须意识到…预示后果:Obviously,ifwedon’tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat…willleadusindanger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.Nodoubt,unlesswetakeeffectivemeasures,itisverylikelythat…毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…Itisurgentthatimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证Frommypointofview,itismorereasonabletosupportthefirstopinionratherthanthesecond.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.Icannotentirelyagreewiththeideathat…我无法完全同意这一观点….Personally,Iamstandingonthesideof…就个人而言,我站在…的一边. 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