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www.sharewithu.com大作文的开头大作文的类型：•单边支持/反对•探讨双方•陈述利弊•半支持半反对•分析解决•多重选择构成：引言段+主体段+结论段一、引言段组成：开头句（Openingsentence）+中心论点步骤：引入话题，同义转述，再根据写作任务表达中心论点I、Openingsentence五种方法:（一）、引人入胜思路：用一个比较有趣的话题先吊起考官的胃口，并吸引他们往下看题目1：Manyschoolsdemandthestudentstowearuniforms.Somepeoplethinkthatsuchapracticecanunderminetheirpersonalityandindividuality.范文：Theissueofwhetherthepracticeofrequiringstudentstowearschooluniformswillaffecttheirpersonalityandindividualityisofgreatinteresttomanypeople.备选：Beofgreatconcernformanyparents„引起父母的关注Beofgreatimportancetomanyscientists„对科学家来说至关重要BeofgreatsignificancetobothAandB„对于A和B都是非常重要的 www.sharewithu.com题目2.：人类如何定义和追求幸福，这样的问题引起公众广泛的争议。范文：Thequestionofhowhumanbeingscandefineandpursuehappinessisamatterofmuchcontentionamongthegeneralpublic.备选：Thequestionof_____________hasbeenwidelydebateintheworldofpolitics.（二）、力排众议思路：先驳斥大众的某个普遍但却错误的观念，指出其与现实不符，然后提出自己的想法或正确想法，并在主体段列举各种理由、证据以及活生生和例子来论证。套路：Althoughitis+副词+过去分词+that„.，thisis„....题目1：Theoldergenerationshaveverytraditionalideasaboutthecorrectwaysoflife,thinkingandbehavior.However,somepeoplethinkthattheseideasarenothelpfulfortheyounggenerationstoprepareformodernlife.范文1：Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthatconventionalviewsaboutahealthylifestyleandproperconductarenolongertoyoungpeople’sneedstoday,thisisactuallynotthecase.题目2：越来越少人照看年老的亲属，而是把他们送到专业人士那边去。范文2：Althoughmanypeoplesubscribetothebeliefthattheiroldrelativescanbetakenbettercareofinanursinghome,thisisinfactacommonmisconceptionthatweneedtoclearup.Frommypointofview,itistheyoungerfamilymemberswhoshouldreallyberesponsibleforlookingaftertheseoldpeopleduringtherestoftheirlives.释义：①普遍认为„，但事实并非如下。Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthat„,thisisactuallynotthecase. www.sharewithu.com②许多人认同这样的观点„，但事实上这却是一种我们需要去澄清的普遍错误观念。Althoughmanypeoplesubscribetothebeliefthat„.,thisisinfactacommonmisconceptionthatweneedtoclearup.③大众观念认为„.，但是现实状况却远比这种观念复杂得多。Althoughconventionalwisdomhasitthat„.,therealityofthesituationisoftenfarmorecomplicatedthanthat.释义：subscribeto订阅、同意、预订conventionalwisdom大众观念(三)、放眼世界思路：从“时间”或“地点”的跨度着手，比如：过去怎么样？题目1：Somepeoplesupportthedevelopmentinagriculture,suchasfarmingindustryandthescientificcreationofnewtypesoffruitandvegetables.Othersopposethisdevelopment.Discussbothviewsandstateyouropinion.范文：Recentdecadeshavewitnessedamajortransformationinagriculturaldevelopment,whereindustrialtechnologiesarebeingemployedandnewvarietiesofcropsarebeingcreated.Yet,opponentsofthisdevelopmenthaveraisedanumberofdifficultquestions.Frommyopinionofviews,thisisareallycomplicatedmatter,andweneedfurtherinvestigationstounderstandthebiggerpicture. 备选：Recentdecadeshavewitnessedanincreaseawarenessof释义：understandthebiggerpicture了解事物的全貌题目2：Withdivorceratesandfamilybreakdownsincreasingglobally,itisgenerallyacceptedthatfamiliestodayarenotasclosetheyusedtobe.范文2： www.sharewithu.comDivorceandfamilybreakdownwerevirtuallyunheardofjust100yearsago.Now,however,almosthalfofallmarriagesfail.Thisphenomenonissymptomaticofthegrowingdistancebetweenfamilymembersinmodernsociety.(四)、兼收并蓄题目1：谁该为修路付费，个人还是政府？范文：Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatthegovernmentshouldmakemoreinvestmentsisexpandingandimprovingroadsystems,whereasotherswhoarenotsoconvincedpresentthecounterargumentthatitistheresponsibilityofthegrowingnumberofprivatecaruserstodealwiththehugecosts.Inmyopinion,bothsidesoftheargumenthavetheirownreasons,andweneedadetailedanalysistogettotherootofthiscontroversy.(五)、异军突起题目1：谈个人科技的发展与贫富差异„范文1：Withthehugeexpansionofhightechnologiesavailabletoindividuals,itissometimesarguedthateconomicandculturalgapsbetweentherichandpoorarebeingfurtherwidened.题目2：淡大型超市和商场的急剧扩张..范文2：Withtheunprecedentedexplosionoflargesupermarketsandshoppingmalls,alotofsmalllocalshopshavequietlydisappearedwhiletheremainingonesarestrugglingforhopelesssurvival.释义：unprecedentedexplosion前所未有的爆发范文3：Withthecontinuousandgradualevolutionofmassmedia,manyseriouscrimesarenowdescribedingreaterdetailonnewspapers,televisionandtheInternet,raisingconsiderablepublicconcernover www.sharewithu.compersonalsafetyandsocialstability.范文4：Withthemassextinctionofendangeredandrarespecies,manycountrieshavetakenharshmeasuresagainstillegalhunting,unregulateddumpingofindustrialwasteandrampantdestructionoftheirnaturalhabitatsbyhumandevelopers.II、中心论点(一）单边支持/反对类型提问：Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?范文1：（反对）→Inmyopinion,thesesubjectarenotonlyusefulbutalsofascinating,anditissimplytooearlyforprimaryschoolchildrentostudyscienceandtechnology.（二）半支持半反对型提问：Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?范文2：→Frommypointofview,„（三）探讨双方型(可以参考前文“兼收并蓄”套路)提问：Discussbothsidesandgiveyourownopinion范文3：→1.Tomywayofthinking,bothsidesoftheargumenthavetheirownreasons,andweneedadetailedanalysistogettotherootofthiscontroversy.双方都有理，需要仔细分析才可了解争议起因→2.Tomywayofthinking,boththeseviewscanbejustifiedtosomeextent.一定程度上都有道理 www.sharewithu.com→3.Tomywayofthinking,boththeseviewscontainsomeelementsofthetruth,whichwillbediscussedindetailinthefollowingessay.注：Which引导定语从句很自然过渡到主体段（四）分析解决型提问：InwhatwayscouldmobilephonesandInternetbeusefultoolderpeople?Howcanoldpeoplebeencouragedtousethishightechnology?→Tomymind,„（五）陈述利弊型提问：Doestheusefulnessofthismethodoflearningoutweighitslimitations?（advantage=usefulness，disadvantage=limitations）→Tothebestofmyknowledge,„（六）多重选择型（少见）提问：Whatothersfactorsshouldbeconsidered?Ofthesefactors,doyouthinkanyoneismoreimportantthanothers?→AsfarasIamconcerned,„二、主体段拓展八法（一）、举例论证(Exemplification)Sample1：亚洲国家正以惊人的速度变得西方化.以中国为例,当青少年去看电影的时候,他们一般都选择好莱坞大片而不选择国产电影.范文1：TheAsiancountriesaregettingwesternizedatastaggeringrate.TakeChinaforexample,whenyoungstersgotothemovies,itiscommonforthemtochooseHollywoodblockbustersoverdomesticfilms.Sampler2：谈大学教育的两大功能：就业与求知范文2：Tobeginwith,itisreallyhelpfulforuniversitystudentstobetaughtsomejob-relatedskillsthathavealreadybecomeamajorfocusofhighereducation.Atypicalexamplecanbefoundintheefforttodeveloptheirinterpersonalskillsnowrequiredbyagrowingnumberofcompaniesasoneofthemostessentialqualitiesofanyjobcandidate.句型：Aninteresting/striking/typicalexampleof„isprovidedbythestoryofsb.who… www.sharewithu.comSample3：动物是人类的朋友.例如，海豚经常从沉船里营救船员.范文3：Animalsarehuman’scompanions.Toillustrate,dolphinsoftenrescuesailorsfromsinkingships.Sample4：大量证据表明，破裂家庭的子女出现情感、行为障碍或触犯法律的可能性是完整家庭子女的2～3倍。范文4：Alargebodyofevidenceprovesthatchildrenfrombrokenfamiliesaretwoorthreetimesaslikelyasthoseinintactfamiliestohaveemotionalorbehavioralproblemsorgetintotroublewiththelaw.Sampler5：个人教育与社会发展之间的关系（特别是）范文5：Decenteducationforeveryindividualcontributessignificantlytotheoverallwell-beingofsociety,especially/particularlywhentheirpersonalachievementsamounttoadrivingforceofsocialprogress.Sampler6：学生的学习压力（特别强调）范文6：Itisnotuncommonthatschoolteachersnowadaystendtoexertundueacademicpressureonyoungstudents,withparticularemphasisonconsistentlygoodperformanceinallsortsoftestsandexaminations.Sampler7：这点可以通过„来说明Sampler7：Itisevidentfromtheinformationsuppliedthatmalearefarmorelikelytocommitcrimes.Thispointcanbeillustrated/emphasizedbythefactthatmaleoffendersaccountedfor96%ofprisoninmates.www.sharewithu.com （二）、引用论证思路：引用“科学证据、研究成果、学术刊物、统计数据”Sample：员工和雇主能否都获益于“在家上班”范文：Thereissomeincontrovertibletosuggestthatbothemployeesandemployerscanbenefitalotfromthegrowingtrendoftelecommuting.Accordingtoarecentarticlepublishedintheworld-famousNatureJournal,whiletheaveragetelecommutercansaveaconsiderableportionoftheirtravelexpenses,itisestimatedthattheircompaniescancutoperationalcostsbyalmostonethirdif25%ofthestaffareallowedtoworkathome.句型： www.sharewithu.com0Accordingtoarecentarticlepublishedintheworld-famousTimeMagazine,…0AccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyagroupofAmericanresearchersoftheUniversityofChicago,…国家大学AmericanUniversityofSouthernCaliforniaYaleUniversityBritishUniversityofOxfordUniversityofCambridgeCanadianUniversityofTorontoYorkUniversityAustralianUniversityofSydneyUniversityofQueensland（三）、递进论证模板：Tobeginwith→Inthesecondplace→LastlySample1：科学研究应由政府还是私人机构开展范文1：Therearemanyreasonsforentrustingscientificresearchtothegovernmentsratherthanprivatecompanies.[支持1]Tobeginwith,manylarge-scaleandlong-termresearchprojectsrequiresubstantialfundingthatonlynationalgovernmentscanafford.[支持2]Inthesecondplace,first-ratescientistswhoenjoyinternationalreputationarelargelyconcentratedingovernment-sponsoredresearchinstitutions.[支持3]Lastly,sincemostprivatecompaniesareprofit-orientated,thefindingsandconclusionsfromtheirresearcharemorelikelytobeskewedorbiasedandevenrepresenttheinterestsofasmallgroup.剖析：支持1：大型、长期的研究项目需要大量的资金，通常只有政府有这样的财力；支持2：一流科学家大量集中在由政府资助的研究机构中；支持3：私人机构大都以利益为导向，故而得出的结果可能是歪曲或带有偏见的，甚至代表某些小团体的利益。注意：不要用Lastbutnotleast，否则引起考官反感，直接用Lastly即可! www.sharewithu.com句型：（适用说明缺点）0Onemajorproblems/advantage/measureof0Anotherbigrisk/benefit/soundapproachisthat„„www.sharewithu.com Furthermore,thereisathirdundesirabledevelopmentSample2：由广泛使用手机所带来的社会、健康和技术问题范文2：Ithasbecomeincreasinglyapparentthatthewidespreaduseofcellphonesgivesrisetoanumberofproblemsinmodernsociety.[支持1]Onemajorproblemsofusingmobiledevicestooregularlyisthattheyareposingapotentialthreattohumanhealthinformofthemicrowaveradiationemitted.[支持2]Anotherbigriskisthatcellphonetechnologyisoftenmanipulatedandevenabusedtoextractandsellusers’personalinformationtothoseunscrupulousmarketingcompanies.[支持3]Furthermore,thereisathirdundesirabledevelopment:Sincecellphonescanprovidecriminalswithincreasedmobilityandaccessibilitytocriticaldata,thenumberofunsolvedcrimesissteadilyontherise..剖析：支持1：健康层面-微波辐射对健康构成潜在的危害支持2：技术方面-技术滥用，个人信息被作为商品卖支持3：社会层面–给犯罪分子作案增加了便利，导致悬案增加释义：poseapotentialtreat(risks)to构成潜在的危害（威胁）unscrupulous肆无忌惮的undesirable不受欢迎的，可能招致麻烦的unsolvedcrimes悬案（四）、对比论证（ComparisonandContrast）思路：正面思维枯竭时，可以换位思考（“逆向思维”），通过A烘托出B的优/缺点题目：探讨老师应该教会学生辩明是否？还是只负责课程教授而不管其他方面提纲：正面论述1道德品质的教育比知识更重要（递进法）正面论述2良好的行为可以促进学生的学习进步（递进法） www.sharewithu.com正面论述3最新的研究证据表明：优秀的学生往往两面俱佳（引用法）反面论述1放弃道德行为的教育会产生许多问题（对比法）范例：„.,teachingstudentshowtodistinguishrightfromwrongismatterofutmostimportanceineducation,especiallyduringtheirformativeyears.【支持1】Tobeginwith,suchmoraleducationisoftenregardedbymostteachersasmuchmoreimportantthanteachingthemacademicknowledge.【支持2】Inaddition,beingfullyawareofthedifferencebetweenrightandwrongeffectivelyimprovestheirownbehavior,whichcaninturnfacilitatetheirlearningprocess.【支持3】AccordingtoarecentstudyconductedbyateamofCanadianresearchersofUniversityofToronto,manytopstudentsinhighschoolnotonlyperformwellacademically,buttheyalsogenerallyshowdecentbehaviorinaconsistentway.【支持4】Insharpcontrast,notprovidingyoungstudentswithapropermoraleducationisasurerecipefordisasterbecauseanumberofseriousproblemsmayresultfromthisfailure.释义：facilitatetheirlearningprocess促进学习（facilitate便利、促进）asurerecipefordisaster灾难性的后果www.sharewithu.com（五）、因果认证(Causeandeffect)思路：分为两类①讲事物原因；②事情结果。模板1：Be动词+过去分词+介词0be(directly)linkedto….0be(strongly)relatedto…0be(unquestionably)tiedto…0be(closely)connectedwith…0be(largely)associatedwith…模板2：0as0since0dueto0owingto0hence0thus0therefore www.sharewithu.com0asaconsequence/result/consequently0thereby:以此达到„目的(不能用在句首,而且后面是加动名词)题目1：生态问题正在被恶化,因此,我们必须采取措施解决环境问题.范文1：Theecologicalproblemsarebeingaggravated;therefore,itisimperativethatwetakemeasurestocombatthepollutionoftheenvironment.题目2：政府应该提高公众的环保意识,以此来促进可持续发展并且创造一个更适合人类生存的环境.范文2：Thegovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservation,therebypromotingsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment.模板3：0leadto„(从句)0giveriseto„(从句)0contributeto„(从句)0resultin„(从句)题目3：Manypeopleusedistance-learningprograms(studymaterialpost,TV,Internet,etc)tostudyathome,butsomethinkthatitcannotbringasbenefitsasattendingcollegeoruniversity.Towhatextenttoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?解析：属于半支持半反对类型：主体段一：提出反对理由写distancelearning的好处(Benefits)主体段二：提出支持理由写distancelearning的坏处之一(Problem1)主体段三：提出支持理由写distancelearning的坏处之二(Problem2)www.sharewithu.com范文3：(主体段二)【主题句】Despitetheconvenienceandrelativelylowcostofdistancelearning,itwouldbewiseforustoconsideritdownside.【支持1】Oneofthebiggestproblemsisthatitcannotcreateanenvironmentthatisconducivetothestudents’learningprocess,especiallythemuch-neededinteractionwiththeirprofessorsandclassmates.【支持2】Thismayresultinaterriblesenseofdisconnectionandevensocialisolationamongthelearners.【支持3】Incomparison,attendingcollegeoruniversityisamorepleasantandexcitingexperienceforyoungstudentsastheycancombineacademiclearningwithawidevarietyofsocialandextracurricularactivities.备注： www.sharewithu.com本段写作模式为“1+3”，即一个主题句+三个支持句。【主题句】以despite为引导的让步状语从句开始，总结主体段一中分析的好处，可视为“转折法；支持1】为“递进法”；【支持2】为“指代法”+“因果法”；【支持3】采用了“对比法”。（六）、指代法思路：用词出现this,that,these,those,it,they,such等代词，与其他方法配合应用模板1：Thisisclearlyshowninthefollowingexample:„.(从句)+举例法题目1：淡新闻报纸对人们思想的巨大影响→适用于传媒/网络类话题范文1：Whenitcomestohowpublicopinionisformed,newspapersareunquestionablyoneofthestrongestpowers.Thisisclearlyshowninthefollowingexample:manyhighschoolstudentsinAmericawhotaketheSATareinthehabitofcitingarticlesfromawidevarietyofinfluentialnewspapersintheirwriting.模板2：Thishasalreadybeenprovedbythecaseof„+举例法题目2：谈越来越多年轻人失业的社会问题范文2：Thereisnodenyingthatchronicyouthjoblessnessisacontributingfactorofsocialinstability.Thishasalreadybeenprovedbythecaseofincreasedcriminalactivitiesamongunemployedorunderemployedurbanyoungsters,manyofwhomevenregardthesewrongdoingsasawaytomakealiving.（七）、转折法套路：0However,„.从句0Yet,„从句0Nevertheless,„从句0Nonetheless,„从句0Inspiteof,„.（八）、小结法思路：在其他方法无法使用或很难使用的时候，可以考虑用“小结法”来凑数注意：无论多少个主体段，但“小结法”只可用在其他一个，不可多用。 www.sharewithu.com三、结尾段四法构成：①归纳句（归纳主体段的主要论点）；②收尾句（以下四法）词汇：0ingeneral0onthewhole0generally0insummary0inconclusion0tosummarize0toconclude0tosumup归纳观点：0Fromtheabovecomparisonandcontrast,anyonecansafelyconcludethat…0Whentheadvantagesanddisadvantagesarecarefullycompared,themoststrikingconclusionisself-evident.0Judgingfromallevidenceoffered,wemayreasonablycometo/drawtheconclusionthat…0Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveattheconclusionthat…通用句型：0Itistruethattodo…bringsaboutbothpositiveandnegativeresults.0Butwecantryourbesttoreducethenegativeinfluencetotheleastextent.Besides,comparedwiththepositiveseffects,thedisadvantageswouldnotsomuch.0Whatwemustdoismakesurethatthepositiveonesareencouragedandthenegativeonesareeliminatedasfaraspossible.0Alltheseopinionsmakesense,andconsequentlyitishardtochoosethebestofthem.Inmyopinion,suchmattersmustbelefttoindividual’sconscience.（一）、建议法思路：针对一个问题提出自己的建议或提出一种妥善的解决之道模板：0Therefore,itis(strongly)suggestedthat…（从句）0Itisurgent(necessary)thatappropriate(effective/proper)actions www.sharewithu.coml(measures/steps/method)shouldbetakentocorrect(improve)…0Bothgovernmentandordinarycitizensshouldjoinhandstomakethis0worldabetterplacetolivein,notonlyforourselves,butalsofor0futuregenerations.题目：Manyparentscomplainthatcomputergameshavenovaluetotheirchildren’studies.Onthecontrary,thoseonlinegameshaveproducedalotofnegativeontheirmentalandphysicaldevelopment.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisview?www.sharewithu.com 结尾段范文：Insummary,frombothphysiologicalandpsychologicalpointsofview,computergamesareindeedvaluelessandmayexertnegativeimpactonthedevelopmentofyoungchildren.Therefore,ithighlyrecommendedthatparentsandschoolsshouldbealerttothisproblem,andrestrictchildren’saccesstothosecomputergames.（二）、未来法思路：对事物将来的发展前景（正面/负面、积极/消极）做出合理预测，指出趋势模板：0Therefore（Thus）,itisprojected（predicted）that…（从句）0Withtheadvent/advantageof…,itisforecastthat…（从句）0Mypredictionabout…isthat…（从句）0Personallyspeaking,Ienvisionafuturewhen…（从句）题目1：Somepeoplethinkthatvisitorstoothercountriesshouldrespectthelocalcustomsandimitatethelocalbehaviors.However,otherpeoplewhodisagreewiththemthinkthatthehostcountryshouldwelcomedifferentforeignculturesbroughtbythesevisitors.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion结构：（双边论证，观点讨论）引言段：通过背景描写引出话题，并提出一个问题，即游客与东道国之间如何互动主体段1：同意意见一方的观点，即游客应该尊重当地习俗并加以模仿主体段2：反对意见的另一方观点，他们认为东道国应该对异族文化采取欢迎态度结尾段范文1：Inconclusion,bothsidesoftheargumentcontainthepartial www.sharewithu.comtruth.Ifvisitorsandlocalsrespectandlearnfromeachother,itisprojectedthatdifferentcustoms,valuesandculturecanenjoyapeacefulandharmoniouscoexistence.题目2：Environmentalproblemsaretoobigforindividualcountriesandindividualpeopletoaddress.Inotherwords,wehavereachedthestagewheretheonlywaytoprotecttheenvironmentisattheinternationallevel.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?结构：(单边论证)结尾段范文2：Giventheaboveargument,itisreasonabletoconcludethatifeverymemberofthesocietyisawareoftherelationshipbetweenhumansandthenatureandstopstheirdestructivebehavior;mypredictionabouttheenvironmentinthenearfutureisthatmanyecologicalstrainswillberelievedtocreatelong-termbenefitsforallcountriesonEarth.题目3：Theworldisexperiencingadramaticincreaseinpopulation.Thisiscausingproblemsnotonlyforpoor,underdevelopedcountries,butalsoforindustrializedanddevelopingnations.Describesomeoftheproblemsthatoverpopulationcauses,andsuggestatleastonepossiblesolution.结构：(分析解决)结尾段范文3：Tosumup,overpopulationexertsmanynegativeinfluencesonunderdevelopedandindustrializednations.Personallyspeaking,ifthecurrenttrendofpopulationexplosionisallowedtocontinue,Ienvisionafuturewhenmanymorepeoplewilldieofstarvationinpoorcountriesandlifeinevenaffluentsocietieswillbecomeunbearablydifficult.（三）、本质法思路：对某一话题或现象进行刨根问底式的探讨，试图透过表象看清事物的本质模板：lInfact,…lInessence,…lAsamatteroffact,…高级句：lThecruxofthemattersseemstobe…crux症结、关键lAtthecoreoftheissueis/are…core核心、本质lStill,thebottomlineisthat…bottomline底线、归根结底 www.sharewithu.com题目：inmoderneducation,computersarebeingwidelyusedinalmosteverysubjectinschoolsanduniversities,sosomepeoplethinkthatteachersarenotplayinganimportantroleintheclassroom.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?结构：主体段1：某些科目是不能用电脑来教的，比如体育课主体段2：教学本身就是一件灵活和富有创造性的事情主体段3：教师能够给学生情感上的支持结尾段范文：Tosumup,education,ortheartofteaching,isnotamechanicalmatterthatcanbeparceledouttostudentsbycomputerprograms.Thecruxofthemattersseemstobethatteachers,astheyhavealwaysbeen,willstillbethebackboneofourschooleducation,whilecomputerissimplyausefultooltoimprovestudents’understandingofthesubjectmatter.（四）、升华法思路：一个话题讨论结束后，切换到与此相关的另一话题或另一个角度，实现升华。模板:0Tobesure,…willbringaboutprofoundchangesin…0Indeed,….aresomethingwecannotaffordtoignore0However,onethingiscertain:(从句)题目1：Therearesocial,medicalandtechnicalproblemsassociatedwiththeuseofmobilephones.Whatformsdotheytake?Doyouagreethattheproblemsoutweighthebenefitsofmobilephones?结构：引言段：明确观点，指出使用手机的缺点远大于其优点主体段1：让步承认使用手机的一些优点，如方便、功能齐全主体段2：分别从社会、医学和技术发展方面阐述手机带来的不足之处结尾段范文1：Inconclusion,Itendtobelievethatthedownsideofusingmobilesphonesfarexceedsitsmerits.Indeed,itvariousdrawbacksaresomethingwecannotaffordtoignorebecausetheyhaveproducedmanyadverseeffectsonpeople’sdailylives.题目2：Internationaltourismisnowthebiggestindustryintheworld.Unfortunately,itbrings www.sharewithu.com tensionratherthatunderstandingbetweenthepeoplefromdifferentcultures.Dowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?结构：引言段：明确观点－国际旅游会造成许多矛盾和误解主体段1：列举了三种文化差异所产生的紧张氛围 主体段2：阐述了国际旅游可能产生的旅游者与当地居民的矛盾结尾段范文2：Inconclusion,theculturalgapthatexistsbetweeninternationaltouristsandtheirforeigndestinationscreatesmoretensionthatunderstandingduringtheirtravels.However,onethingiscertain:internationaltourismwillcontinuetoenjoyaboomtimeandsendagrowingnumberoftravelerstomanyexoticplacesaroundtheworld.注意事项：1.画蛇添足：文章写完了,发现字数不够,就随便加上几句.而这几句恰好游离于文章的中心思想之外,或与其观点恰好相反.如：一篇关于阐述考试作弊危害性的文章.Butsometimesitisunderstandablethatstudentscheatonexamsunderheavyacademicpressures.2.空喊口号:0Doitnow!Doitfromourselves!Let’smakeourcitygreener!0Noelectricity,nopower,noworld,nofuture,nohumanbeings!3.表决心：I’mdeterminedtoovercomeanydifficultiesandstudyEnglishbetterinthefuture.4.虎头蛇尾：0SoIthinkthatmakingourcitygreenerisveryimportant.0Therefore,noelectricityshouldbewasted.